Wednesday, March 9, 2011

ESL 2 Essay Contest Winner: Jessica Juliana Bedoya Hernandez

After months of hard work and learning how to write paragraphs and essays, Ms. Avila’s ESL 2 classes had a competition to see which student could write a good autobiography.  For most of the students this was the first time they wrote a full autobiographical essay in English.  It was a hard decision, many great autobiographies were written, but Jessica’s organization of ideas, use of transitions, explanations, and figurative language won her the title of the best autobiography from all the ESL 2 classes.  Congratulations Jessica for your hard work!!
___________________________________________________________
My life in the United States

By: Jessica Juliana Bedoya Hernandez
Coming to America was like opening a door to a new paradise; I had to accept the challenge of living in America. Also, when I stared school at WOHS, I was feeling very anxious and exited at the same time because many people were helping me and that made me feel like I am at home. Additionally, living in America was like trying to discover a new world, with new people that I had never seen before in my life, like Chinese people. Furthermore, this new paradise, offers me new opportunities to have a better life in America.
When I came to America I stared school at WOHS. My first day in the school I had to take some tests and then I had to follow Maria, I became her shadow. Also, I remember having to take the bus by myself for the first time.  I remember that I needed help because I was lost and a new friend, Gabriela, she helped me to find my  bus, when I was in the bus I felt more relaxed because I met Anna and she told me that she lives next to my new home.  By the end of the day I made several friends.  Moreover, I had to accept a lot of challenges like I have to adapt to all my new classes and learn how to find them. In Colombia we don’t have the same schedule like an American school.  Back home, we stayed in the same classroom all day, the teachers moved from classroom to classroom, not the students and school closed at 1:30 P.M., not 2:30 like WOHS.  All of this was new and I accepted to learn about my new life.
Living in America is like being born again, because I stared a new life. Furthermore, my first day in the USA I felt very, very sad.  I will not forget how sad was my family, specially my grandmother who I had lived with since I was born.  I remember she told me while crying that she had a big pain in her heart because her little girl left Colombia to move to America for a better life and that I should follow and reach all my dreams of becoming a professional pilot. When I remember those words and I remember my grandmother, it makes me cry, because my grandmother is a very important person in my life. I also found a lot differences in this culture, like the food, because the food of my country Colombia is more natural. Additionally, living with my aunt was another big change, because she is a controlling person, I understand that she wants the best for my life but sometimes she needs to understand that I have a different style of life and different customs.
                One of the best things about coming to America was that here I can have more opportunities. For example, I can have a good future to have a better life so I can treat my mom like a queen. Moreover, the environment in America is a very challenging environment because here I live in a city and the life is very fast just like a lion running to catch a bite to eat. To conclude, In America I have a lot of new life experiences.  I am learning a new language and adapting to the American culture has been very hard, because before I had more time with my mom and now she has to work all the time and now is very sad for me that I don’t have too much time with her, now I look like a crazy prisoner in my home talking alone and going up and down the stairs missing my mom; even though she is with me in America, because of our new life, I don’t get to be with her as much.
To conclude, coming to America was always my wish, but now I understand that to have a better life you have sacrifice a-lot, like spending time with my mom, and leaving my grandmother alone in Colombia; that destroyed my heart.  However, all of these changes are for a better life for me and my family. Moreover, coming to this country is teaching me that you have to appreciate all that you have, especially your family because you don’t know what can happened tomorrow like what happened to me, one day I was in Colombia with my family and the next day I was in the United Stated starting to live a new life and new experiences.   

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

ESL 2: How to Read a Book Test Review

This week we learned the benefits of reading a book, how to choose the right book to enjoy reading, and information to help us read a book.  The following are from our class notes to prepare you for a test on what we have learned.
Things a Book can do for you:
          Make you forget your problems
          Provide a free vacation
          Give a sense of satisfaction when you finish
          Help you use your imagination
          Gives you new ideas
          Learn new vocabulary
          Gives you new experiences
          Connect you to the characters
          Make you think and feel for characters
          Teaches you about other ways of life, other types of people, other types of choices
          Give hope  for solving problems
          Inspire
          Make you  DREAM
7 Steps to Read a Book:
STEP 1: Read “blurbs” inside and outside covers of any book
STEP 2: Glance through the table of contents
STEP 3: Write a list of all the characters
STEP 4: Read and take notes of important or repeated points.
STEP 5: Pay attention to what the narrator says and presents about the characters
STEP 6: Pay attention to dialogue
STEP 7: Make notes on what characters actually do in comparison to what they say.

Reading a Book Vocabulary List:
  • 1st Person Point of View: You know who is narrator the story / If you talk about yourself you are 1st person
  • 3rd Person Point of View: You don’t know who the narrator is/ use of « he, she, they »
  • Plot: The parts of the story (introduction, conflict, rising action, climax, falling action, resolution)
  • Theme: What the book means
  • Subject: General topic or topics
  • Author’s Judgment: What the author thinks of the character
  • Narrator’s Judgment: What the narrator tells us about the characters
  • Judgment by others: What other characters say and think about a specific character
  • Thoughts or Mental Actions: What the characters think
  • Physical Actions: What the characters do
  • Dialogue: What the characters say
  • Physical Description: What the character looks like
  • Characterization: To describe a character





 

Thursday, February 17, 2011

Best of the Best HSPA PREP SITES

We are one week away from the HSPA!!  After two months of students working on the HSPA sites in this blog, I have put together a list of all the best sites to help you with the Language Arts HSPA Test based on your comments!
So…click and get ready to do HSPA PREP!!
·         For Everything Language Arts HSPA: http://www.state.nj.us/education/njpep/assessment/hspa/hspa_la/index.htm

·         Persuasive Essay Writing:
o   On-Line Persuasive Writing Tutorial:
Sample Persuasive Essay:

·         Expository Essay:            
o   Sample HSPA Style Expository Essay:  http://www.thewritesource.com/studentmodels/ws2k-friendship.htm

·         Narrative Essay:

·         HSPA Reading Practice:
o   English Language Study Zone (click on level 410 or 570): http://web2.uvcs.uvic.ca/courses/elc/studyzone/

·         Vocabulary:
o   Learn Advanced Vocabulary and Help Feed the Hungry: http://www.freerice.com/

·         Figurative Language:

Monday, February 7, 2011

ESL 2 SHAPE POEM

A SHAPE POEM is a free verse poem that the words are written in the shape of the message of the poem.  The lines of the poem form a pattern, usually related to the subject-matter of the poem
Example:
UP by. Ms. Avila

                                                     UP             
                                            Try to go
                                    The more you
                        Each step takes effort
Steps are always important to move up

Create Your Own Shape Poem:

http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/interactives/shape/